Thursday 5 November 2015

Broken neck

Start Writing Here:
On wednesday 2013 i just got back from work. i thought”I could use a train ride” so i went to the train station,I got in when It was a beautiful day.

5 min later as soon as I got to my destination
the door opened all the people were going out the door.
Then i walked through the door then the

train door closed & hit my neck.
luckly i survived
The End
Q1 it was all fake it was just a made up story
hope you enjoyed:)

Tuesday 27 October 2015

Egg Friend Race

Start writing here:WALT: write an exciting introduction to hook our audience
           write a recount with one big idea
on Wednesday 21st  2015 room 9 Pt England.
Mr Bax made us all grab an egg so we all did.
Mr Bax was up to something?




My class was doing some work, Mr Bax stood then said”close your chromebook and grab one egg” so we all grabbed one egg.Then we had to draw a face, we all used a vivid to draw. We had to give our egg friend a name, so my egg friend was named Egg.



Then when we all were done drawing and naming, Mr Bax said”Line up outside” so we all did. I was wondering where we were going. When we went to do the park, Mr Bax was holding some spoons as soon as we got to the park.



Then Mr Bax said”we were having a egg friend race” I was excited but no one else was, they didn’t want to do the race because we might of cracked our eggs.



Then the race began we holded spoons with our eggs on top, it was difficult, but i made it. We had to go over 4 things and go under 1 thing. Once everyone had a try, some people had their eggs cracked, some people didn’t.



We had funerals and stuff like that. It was so fun. Sound wave was my friends egg name. His egg died but it was kind of funny and sad at the same time. I had a lot of fun.

Wednesday 23 September 2015

Smart Email


We are learning about how to be safe with our emails. and how to be formal or informal.
we have to use polite words friendly words and casual words.

Thursday 17 September 2015

Crocodile



One morning there was a man who was fishing out into the open.
there was a big rumble under water, he saw a crocodile under his boat and bit his motor.
he had nothing to do but swim to safety
he pulled out his pistol and started shooting bang boom bang bang!!!!!!! The croc died

he was safe. when he made it to shore he walked all the way home.

The bull chase

One day a man was walking along to the water. He was thinking of going fishing,but he needed to have a boat. but then he felt big footsteps it was shaking the ground. He turned around then a terrifying big bull was chasing him. he was wondering why the bull was chasing him.
he jumped in the water the bull stopped then walked away. he was very lucky he felt happy of himself.

Tuesday 15 September 2015

My writing rubric

Start Writing Here: on Monday 7th September 2015 1 O’clock our school done cross country. I had a feeling that i might come last. First the year 1 students have to go then,2,3,4,5,6,7 & 8.We had our own house colours there was blue, red, green & yellow my team was blue .When i heard the loud clap noise i ran as fast as i could it was exciting I got tired so quickly  but i never stopped




i just jogged & jogged but i was so hot i had to keep running it was so intense that i never knew where to go, so i just followed the person in front of me.I was tired i started walking but i never gave up so i ran the teachers were saying”run! run! run! come on”there was alot of people at the back of me. At last i finally made it to the end i past the line but i didn’t know what place i came i felt happy of myself i was thirsty & hot. Then everybody else came running down through the finish line.




We still had to wait for the year 7s to go. A couple minutes later we went back to our class that was the best running day ever i was so worried i was gonna come last but i didn’t it was awesome because blueBenioni Duthie
won on the cross country for the year fives. One of the students in the blue team came first so blue won go blue!!! Some other teams like yellow,red & green won to so blue wasn’t the only one that won.




Another word:is that alot of people wagged cross country just because they make excuses that they couldn’t run
someone wagged cross country one of them started with a m  

Wednesday 19 August 2015

Trade & Enterprise

WALT:  Elaborate on our ideas by giving extra detail and background information.
            Use capital letters & full stops correctly.



Trade & Enterprise
This Term we are learning about Trade & enterprise. In team 4 we have our own banks, the money is called pt & pieces. With our pt & pieces we have auctions & buy ourselves something.

the currency is, 0.50 pieces is white/0.20 pieces is red/1.00PT is blue/2.00PT is green
0.50 pieces is 50 cents & 1.00PT is 1 dollar.Our PT & Pieces is a round circle shaped chip piece. We earn PT by Being on task all the time .

We get to choose our own jobs with jobs we get payed 1-3PT a day
with our banks we can earn as many PT’s as we can. Then buy
some stuff.We also have Trade fairs.

The job that I picked was pushing in chairs all the time.
Thats kind of a easy job but i like it in my bank i only have 3.75PT
in my bank.  

There are awesome kinds of stuff to buy theres tags,loom bands & toys like a slingshot.
Im making a slingshot i might make it cost 1.00PT my Team has only made 4 slingshots. Its fun to buy stuff.

Monday 17 August 2015

Making a road

When I crashed my plane

WALT: Use adverbs to make our writing exciting.


When I Crashed My Plane
Once I was in My plane, I saw a storm heading towards me. It struck my plane dead. Then I was falling to the ground and I saw a village. I said “move out of the way move out of the way.” The people were running as fast as they could. The people grabbed all there stuff & ran shouting “ahhh ahhh ah ahhh ahhh." The people were screaming running forward left and right ahh ah ahh.

I tried to stopped but my controllers were dead & broken. I couldn't do anything so I self destructed and ditched my plane. Quickly I pulled out my parachute and landed to safety. Luckily the explosion didn't get the people so they lived.
The End.

Friday 24 July 2015

My awesome Holiday

On the first day i played ps4 & ps3 with my brother the games we played was: Minecraft AW. On minecraft I built a huge giant stone mediaeval castle it was the best castle I’ve ever made in minecraft. It had a fortress inside it with gates & flags i also had guards. It was the best.


I also studied the bible for 2 hrs with my 2 cousins, brother & my nana we done that every day we started at 3:30 & ended at 5:30 it was kind of fun but i liked it. on the bible i was reading the proverbs and about how god made the world and that we were made from him. We also believe in god.


On thursday my mum, brother, nana  & I went to pak’ n ‘ save to get our lunch for school it was cool walking to pak’ n ‘ save, it was like an exercise.


It was so much fun in the holidays, it was the best and it will allways.
my most favourite thing in the holidays was when I played Mindcraft & built my huge giant stone castle with guards.


Thursday 25 June 2015

a gold peanut catches a 678 pound fish

introducing a gold peanut who catches a 678 pound fish & lets go, hope
you enjoy:)

Once there was a gold peanut, he was a orphan
he was going out to fishing, he started packing all his stuff:fishing rod
bait & his boat.

“let's go fishing” he threw the fish line. & until the
the water started rumbling “what’s h...happening” boom
the peanut Caught a fish “its so hard to pull” he was pulling as
hard as he can, & then aha i caught you no running now.

The peanut was happy:) im gonna see how much you weigh
a couple of minutes later oh you weigh 678 pounds.
Im gonna cook you up & eat you.

The End

thanks for reading hope you enjoyed it have
a nice day see ya.

Tuesday 23 June 2015

Create a word problem



In maths we were learning about problem solving with Mrs J. We had to write a word problem to go with Mrs J's number problem and then solve what ever was in the problem. Here is my work.

Thursday 28 May 2015

Jack And The Beanstalk

The Amazing beanstalk   
on january 21st at  1:00pm jacks house was next to pt england school.
his family was poor so he went outside and saw a man he said i would like to buy your cow for some beans jack said ok, here you go. jack went inside and the mum was angry she said what the, i thought you were gonna make money. not beans the mum threw the beans outside. in the morning there was a giant beanstalk. jack climbed he looked down he was very high. he was scared so he kept climbing and climbing, then "What's that up in the sky" It was a castle! and he found a castle there was millions of gold so he said “I might take some gold because my family is poor, i need to do something to help my mum” 2 mins and 38 seconds later. “there's a lot of gold, only one more ingot to go” jack had filled 3 bags of gold.
so he grabbed the last one, but then he saw a giant sleeping "Whoa i never saw that giant the last time, lucky he didn't wake up" 7 seconds later. phew w, lucky the giant didn't wake up. but then he dropped some gold bing a loud bang on the floor, and the giant woke up. so jack sprinted to a leaf on the beanstalk and hid underneath it. Bang, Bang, Bang, the giant's footsteps were really loud. Jack quietly climbed down the beanstalk he went down and down and down, "I can see Auckland from here, all right now to get to my home" Once jack reached the bottom he was happy he didn't get seen from the giant. "Wait i forgot the other two bags of gold" Jack at least got one bag of gold, so he is still happy. jacks mom came and said"GOLD! We're rich.


                                                     The End

Monday 18 May 2015

nepal earthcake

Earthquake causes 1,000s of deaths
Tidus U. 11th May 2015

On April 25th at 11:56am an earthquake smashed Nepal to pieces. There has been 1000 of people who got trapped under the bricks people were digging for survivors and searching more than 1000 people died during the earthcake. some people survived and some people didn`t survive. earthcakes are always scary. earthcakes can destroy 100s of homes also cars. over 1 million children couldnt go school because 24,000 classrooms have been damaged. a baby 5 months old was traped for 22 hours under walls and was ok.

diamante poem


Tidus (noun)
favourite game is dark souls 2 play games (adjectives)
gaming, watching, cleaning (verbs)
boy, male,  (nouns)
playing, gaming watching, (verbs)
fun, awesome (adjectives)

human, person (synonyms/antonyms)

Monday 11 May 2015

video games

holiday

At the easter show I went to a lot of rides they were called tug boat,gforce,the slide and the carnivore. It was awesome at the easter show. There was lots more
rides left to go. We started to watch motorbikes do tricks like  backflips
and frontflips a lady beside was shouting “OMG”.When the motorbike people stopped
a helicopter came down and landed .


.At my uncles birthday we went to a restaurant called Gengys Khan I Think?
we had dinner. then my brother put pepper and salt inside my coke for no reason
i tried it and it tasted normal, so i drank it all then my brother came and
put even more pepper and salt then i tasted it and it was yuck.
then he started to put rubbish in it,chippies and cardboard. we started to
sing happy birthday to my uncle.when my brother put chips and tomato sauce together
it smelt like poo. I said it smells like normal chippies.When the birthday was finish we went outside then me,my brother and my
cousins were playing tag I started hiding at the back of the cars and  running
around the place I had fun but then my mum said”we're going” it was fun


we also went bowling I got the most points. i also got 1 strike for the first time in my life my aunty,uncle,cousins and my family were shouting”YaY!! you got your first strike”
in bowling i got 97 points after that we bought some tokens and we got 14 tokens each. with 14 tokens i got 214 tickets i spent it on a aluminum spring and a small
ball i started bouncing it and my brother said that ball ain't
bouncy. our aluminum spring could stretch really far.

After that we went laser strike we had to shoot lasers at each other I got the most points in laser strike to` i got 4026 points i was coming
first my brother came second my nana got 21 points my aunty
got 22 points my brother got 3000 and somthing?.
It was so cool there.


I  started playing minecraft with my brother. We started building together but we lost all our
stuff so we made a new world and we lost our stuff again so we left the game
and started  to try and make a rail but we couldn’t. So we played on the game again but not on minecraft because we kept losing our stuff and it was
annoying. My brother started to get a little angry. I had a lot of fun that day.

game review

game review by the famous, awesome and cool Tidus

Name of Game: Run2


How do you score/ win: run through obstacles then finish the stage then move on

Difficulty: 6/10

Fun: 1/10

Description:
  • 2 sentences about what the game is. What you have to do. jump over gaps.and run
  • 1 sentences about why you would or wouldn’t recommend this game to a friend. its not fun but only a little
  • 2 sentences giving reasons your opinions (why you think what you think).because you just have to jump over gaps. its also boring because its just running





in run2 you have to jump over gaps when you finish the game you move on to the next level you will need a lot of concentrating.
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Thursday 7 May 2015

Tidus Game Review

Game Review by the famous, 
awesome and cool
Tidus




Name of Game: Run


How do you score/ win: run through obstacles then finish the stage then move on

Difficulty: 6/10

Fun: 1/10

Description:
  • 2 sentences about what the game is. What you have to do. jump over gaps.run
  • 1 sentences about why you would or wouldn’t recommend this game to a friend. its not really fun
  • 2 sentences giving reasons your opinions (why you think what you think).because you just have to jump over gaps. its also boring because its just running





in run2 you have to jump over gaps when you finish the game you move on to the next level you will need a lot of concentrating.