WALT: Use adverbs to make our writing exciting.
When I Crashed My Plane
Once I was in My plane, I saw a storm heading towards me. It struck my plane dead. Then I was falling to the ground and I saw a village. I said “move out of the way move out of the way.” The people were running as fast as they could. The people grabbed all there stuff & ran shouting “ahhh ahhh ah ahhh ahhh." The people were screaming running forward left and right ahh ah ahh.
I tried to stopped but my controllers were dead & broken. I couldn't do anything so I self destructed and ditched my plane. Quickly I pulled out my parachute and landed to safety. Luckily the explosion didn't get the people so they lived.
The End.
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