In the holidays for term 3 I didn't do much all I really did was play games and went to my papa's house.
The games I played were Roblox, And other games on pc.
This might be all I did in the holidays wasn't much.
We also had a birthday, the birthday was for my brother turning 14 years old. We went ten pin bowling for the birthday.
And that's pretty much all I did for the holidays.
THE END
WALT: write a story about the holidays
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ReplyDeleteHello Tidus!
ReplyDeleteHi There, My name is Ezekiel and I am a student in Rm 14 At May Road School, I really like your post about your holidays. It made me think my holidays when I didn't do much. Have you thought about rereading your stories and using your punctuation. If you would like to see my learning, My blog is http://mrsekekielh.blogspot.co.nz/
Ok thanks for the advice.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your writing and your ending.
Hi Tidus
ReplyDeletereally like your writing about your holiday
but it still needs a little puchuation
from Ben
Thank you
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