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Smart Email

We are learning about how to be safe with our emails. and how to be formal or informal.
we have to use polite words friendly words and casual words.

Crocodile

One morning there was a man who was fishing out into the open.

there was a big rumble under water, he saw a crocodile under his boat and bit his motor.

he had nothing to do but swim to safety

he pulled out his pistol and started shooting bang boom bang bang!!!!!!! The croc died

he was safe. when he made it to shore he walked all the way home.

The bull chase

One day a man was walking along to the water. He was thinking of going fishing,but he needed to have a boat. but then he felt big footsteps it was shaking the ground. He turned around then a terrifying big bull was chasing him. he was wondering why the bull was chasing him.

he jumped in the water the bull stopped then walked away. he was very lucky he felt happy of himself.

My writing rubric

Start Writing Here: on Monday 7th September 2015 1 O’clock our school done cross country. I had a feeling that i might come last. First the year 1 students have to go then,2,3,4,5,6,7 & 8.We had our own house colours there was blue, red, green & yellow my team was blue .When i heard the loud clap noise i ran as fast as i could it was exciting I got tired so quickly  but i never stopped

i just jogged & jogged but i was so hot i had to keep running it was so intense that i never knew where to go, so i just followed the person in front of me.I was tired i started walking but i never gave up so i ran the teachers were saying”run! run! run! come on”there was alot of people at the back of me. At last i finally made it to the end i past the line but i didn’t know what place i came i felt happy of myself i was thirsty & hot. Then everybody else came running down through the finish line.

We still had to wait for the year 7s to go. A couple minutes later we went back to our class that was the best running day ever i was so worried i was gonna come last but i didn’t it was awesome because blue

won on the cross country for the year fives. One of the students in the blue team came first so blue won go blue!!! Some other teams like yellow,red & green won to so blue wasn’t the only one that won.

Another word:is that alot of people wagged cross country just because they make excuses that they couldn’t run

someone wagged cross country one of them started with a m  

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