My writing rubric

Start Writing Here: on Monday 7th September 2015 1 O’clock our school done cross country. I had a feeling that i might come last. First the year 1 students have to go then,2,3,4,5,6,7 & 8.We had our own house colours there was blue, red, green & yellow my team was blue .When i heard the loud clap noise i ran as fast as i could it was exciting I got tired so quickly  but i never stopped

i just jogged & jogged but i was so hot i had to keep running it was so intense that i never knew where to go, so i just followed the person in front of me.I was tired i started walking but i never gave up so i ran the teachers were saying”run! run! run! come on”there was alot of people at the back of me. At last i finally made it to the end i past the line but i didn’t know what place i came i felt happy of myself i was thirsty & hot. Then everybody else came running down through the finish line.

We still had to wait for the year 7s to go. A couple minutes later we went back to our class that was the best running day ever i was so worried i was gonna come last but i didn’t it was awesome because blue

won on the cross country for the year fives. One of the students in the blue team came first so blue won go blue!!! Some other teams like yellow,red & green won to so blue wasn’t the only one that won.

Another word:is that alot of people wagged cross country just because they make excuses that they couldn’t run

someone wagged cross country one of them started with a m